Picture from College Entrance Exam Center
One day, Lilien took a ball to the park and wanted to find someone to play with. However, there was nobody there. While she was ready to go back home, she saw a little cat along besides the flowers. And she stopped to play with it. Feeling happy with the cat, Lilien decided to take it home.
Later, Lilien told her mother why she brought the cat back, how cute it was and promised that she would take responsibility for it. It did not take her too long to persuade her mom. After that, Lilien took the cat to the park every day and grew more attached to it. Two weeks later, she found some other stray cats in the park. Due to her sympathy, Lilien took them home without asking her mother.
When they got home, all of the cats dashed into the door and started to play in the living room. Stunned, Lilien did not know what to do but watched them make a mess. From the experience, her mom would never allow her to keep pets.
raya11600 Said:
on December 5, 2007 at 1:38 am
Wow! How nice Lilien’s mother is! If she was my mom, she mustn’t allow me to keep the pets in the house. Very good article.
lilien0320 Said:
on December 5, 2007 at 1:46 am
Your article is fluent.
Special is, the name you call the girl is very beautiful!!!
oscar7943 Said:
on December 10, 2007 at 4:00 am
It’s not a good idea to take pets home without parents’ agreement and it’s also made her embarrassed.The girl wants someone to play with her and then bring them home without her parents’ agreement.At last she is afraid to be banned keeping pets.From happiness to regret.The turning and the descanting is good. The thing I think you need is that you need more imagination to tell a story.
P.S. The words you used also good.And I sometimes need to find the dictionary.